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Re: The Dark Side of the Moon - Prologue
Hello!! I've just returned to YWS after a looooooong break, but here's my review. It was great, although a bit dragging for me. It's intriguing, and that's good. I'll be ...
Nov 10, 2008 -
Re: The Six Letter Word
Hello!! Very true. Gossip is addictive. XD Anyway, let's get on to nitpicks: Every few minutes I would find myself glancing over my shoulder at Lori and each time I ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: The Revenge Part 1
Great story!! I found a few stuff wrong though... 1.) Velvety night sky, I'm not sure if there's a word velvety. I think velvet would work just fine. 2.) The ...
May 10, 2008 -
Re: Garden of Hideous - Chap. 1
Hello! I stumbled on this today, and I don't regret it. I love fairytale rewrites! Anyway, on to the story: Things I liked about it: 1.) It had great grammar ...
May 10, 2008 -
Re: live like you were dying
Love the way you double space things. It makes the entire thing much easier to read. ^^ But here are some of the corrections I found: "What a poor fait ...
May 10, 2008